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bujhee kom
May 21, 2011, 12:10 AM
Oohh bhais, Ki bolbu...Hothaat korey mathai ashlo tai, check it out....


Gajar Rajjey Prithivi Goddomoy...
Rastaar Dustbin-e purono chera chamrar sandal
Jeno
Adh-khawa ek kerosine bhaja bashi aam-shotto...
othoba Paratha

Kemon hoise bhais?

Zunaid
May 21, 2011, 12:16 AM
You want poetry? Here (http://www.kazi.net/zunaid/poems/)

Penned many decades ago. I used to be young. Seriously!

Rabz
May 21, 2011, 12:49 AM
Javed bhai ki bhabir bokuni kheyechilen ?

bujhee kom
May 21, 2011, 12:59 AM
Boss apni ekjon Kobi! Ebong Painter.
Allah bless you Dr. Zed.

bujhee kom
May 21, 2011, 01:05 AM
Javed bhai ki bhabir bokuni kheyechilen ?

Naa rabz my wife went to Soshur bari, I mean or babar bari!
Ami tai eka eka nijei amar ekta puran juta kamrai dekhlaam, kokhono jail-e gele othoba shotrura jodi amakey kokhono kothao atkaye torture korey, juta kamrate baddhio korey tai ager thekei practice kori, taholey jaatey porey gie manoshik koshto-ta kom hoi....

Rifat
May 21, 2011, 01:08 AM
a friend of mine wrote this Poem:


I am a Walking Contradiction
.by Khairul Nual on Monday, March 14, 2011 at 9:22pm.

I've memorized just about a handful of quranic verses.
Yet I've failed to imply them to my life so has it been worth it? or am I just worthless..



I've grown a beard out but if you ask me advice about Islamic restrictions based on its jurisdiction.. I'd have no clue..cuz I am just a walking contradiction.


I've told more people to pray the dawn prayer than I've missed in my life and thats alot.. I've enticed and given many advice to the humble like.. sayin why dont you just connect the dots..

I tell myself that I'm made to always help various people..
When in fact I need the most help from the various evils.



I am just a walking contradiction..



If you disect my intentions you'd probably find an infection..



Im like an injection from a family of feeble needles

being pinched under the skin to puncture a vien without any bloody details.



See my thoughts are covered by the hijab and different islamic layers..

But my actions yeild when it's time for the congregrational prayers

I'm a complete man with a complete mission-statement

A walking,talking contradiction up right and blatant.



I am efficient when it comes to sin's cuz its one of my natural emissions.

Blind and sometimes very insincere is my vision..



A walking contradiction wishing one day I'd get rid of this addiction.



When you converse with me I make it seem like I feel hellfires heat..

When in actuallity my arrogance has frozen the very nerves that connects from the head to my feet.



I appear to be modest with my fame, health and wealth..

Though I constantly cheat expressing myself.



I am just a walking contradictioin..stranded until it is the one truth that I yearn to meet.

Im just caught up with religion and theres nothing wrong with the decision but sometimes

its just better that I take a seat.



May God help the believers wipe out their hypocrisy and stop them from being walking contradictions..

For truly some, this is the worst of all afflictions.



.

bujhee kom
May 21, 2011, 01:18 AM
Powerful Rifat!!
Powerful poetry by Khairul Nual!

Zunaid
May 21, 2011, 01:23 AM
Rifat - your friend is talented. Very nicely done.
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auntu
May 21, 2011, 03:16 AM
Naa rabz my wife went to Soshur bari, I mean or babar bari!
Ami tai eka eka nijei amar ekta puran juta kamrai dekhlaam, kokhono jail-e gele othoba shotrura jodi amakey kokhono kothao atkaye torture korey, juta kamrate baddhio korey tai ager thekei practice kori, taholey jaatey porey gie manoshik koshto-ta kom hoi....
Javed bhai juta khawa bad die ei Shosta kobita ta porte paren... almost same tortured hoben...

[বাংলা]ভালোবাসা? সে তো খেল তামাশা
প্রেম? সে তো দ্রোহের কাল।
রোদে ঝকমকে রাংতা কাগজ
আমার নির্লিপ্ত চিলেকোঠায়।[/বাংলা]

roman
May 21, 2011, 03:35 AM
You want poetry? Here (http://www.kazi.net/zunaid/poems/)

Penned many decades ago. I used to be young. Seriously!

amazing stuff..
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roman
May 21, 2011, 03:41 AM
ektu shahosh kore amar lekha ekta gaan er koyek line dissi. khoma shundor drishti te dekhben....


megher velai veshe periye koto roddur
shob maya sariye jabo ochinpur
jekhane thakbe shudhu pakhir kolotan
chokh mele cheye dekho
e jeno jiboneri gaan
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Banglaguy
May 21, 2011, 07:43 AM
You want poetry? Here (http://www.kazi.net/zunaid/poems/)

Penned many decades ago. I used to be young. Seriously!

You were never young... Don't lie :)

Isnaad
May 21, 2011, 10:31 AM
ektu shahosh kore amar lekha ekta gaan er koyek line dissi. khoma shundor drishti te dekhben....


megher velai veshe periye koto roddur
shob maya sariye jabo ochinpur
jekhane thakbe shudhu pakhir kolotan
chokh mele cheye dekho
e jeno jiboneri gaan
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How come a person from Rome writes so nice pieces in Bangla? ;)
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bujhee kom
May 21, 2011, 02:31 PM
Javed bhai juta khawa bad die ei Shosta kobita ta porte paren... almost same tortured hoben...

[বাংলা]ভালোবাসা? সে তো খেল তামাশা
প্রেম? সে তো দ্রোহের কাল।
রোদে ঝকমকে রাংতা কাগজ
আমার নির্লিপ্ত চিলেকোঠায়।[/বাংলা]

Auntu, tomar kobitar line-gula amar booker gobhirey aghaat haaney!
Ami khoto-bikkhoto feel kori...

bujhee kom
May 21, 2011, 02:34 PM
ektu shahosh kore amar lekha ekta gaan er koyek line dissi. khoma shundor drishti te dekhben....

megher velai veshe periye koto roddur
shob maya sariye jabo ochinpur
jekhane thakbe shudhu pakhir kolotan
chokh mele cheye dekho
e jeno jiboneri gaan
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Maratmok roman bhai! Jibonto!
Jibon o Mirtoo nie apni ekhaney bolchen...
Apnar depiction of a spirit flying over the cloud is indeed Jibonto! Khuby Maratmok!

bujhee kom
May 21, 2011, 02:40 PM
Dr. Zed uncleji, I love all of your poems in that collection. I also absolutely love the graphics and usage of that very specific Red color. I also loved the paintings. I liked your usage of fonts as well.

Allah made you a very special, gifted, talented, brainy and compassionate man...I am just saying that it is a very wonderful of pleasure to be in company of you here in BC...I feel indeed very fortunate. It is wonderful that you share your mind, heart, your inner feelings with us through this collection of poems and your constant compassionate/kind engage in this forum!

"dhaka" is my favourite of your poems.
...
Smoky smokestacks and sooty walls
Dirty doings in dirtier halls
... are my favourite lines.

bujhee kom
May 21, 2011, 03:13 PM
Sorry guys I know I posted this before in another thread ...I just think It is so amazing of a poem by one of the greatest of poets of the 20th century, Sylvia Plath, I thought I post it again, listen to it, it's her own voice.
She was very beautiful before she killed herself.

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bujhee kom
May 21, 2011, 03:18 PM
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bujhee kom
May 21, 2011, 03:27 PM
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Zeeshan
May 21, 2011, 08:13 PM
Eeeeehhh, poddyo rochona??? Podyo rochona giri ber kortasi tomar. Porashuna baad diya, kaaj kormo baad diya....kobita shahityo niye chorcha.....darao na....oi Suloyman....pordar rod-ta dey.....

auntu
May 22, 2011, 01:37 AM
eeeeehhh, poddyo rochona??? Podyo rochona giri ber kortasi tomar. Porashuna baad diya, kaaj kormo baad diya....kobita shahityo niye chorcha.....darao na....oi suloyman....pordar rod-ta dey.....
[বাংলা] এই কয়েকটি লাইন জিসানের অন্তরে এতো গভীরভাবে প্রথিত... সময়ে সময়ে তা নিজে থেকেই উচ্চারিত হয়ে যায়... অতঃপর পর্দা হতে অপঃসৃয়মান রড আর জীসান দ্রুত অপঃসৃয়মান ঘর হতে। রড বাহক হতে জীসানের আনুভূমিক দুরত্ব দ্রুত গানিতিক হারে সম্রসারিত... দ্রুত পিছলে চলা সময় এবং স্মৃতি শুধু রেখে যায় তীব্র বেদনার কালচে দাগ...। [/বাংলা]

ahnaf
May 22, 2011, 04:44 AM
You want poetry? Here (http://www.kazi.net/zunaid/poems/)

Penned many decades ago. I used to be young. Seriously!

beautiful writing bhaiya..especially wait,tear drop,its over.. Why you stopped writing?

ahnaf
May 22, 2011, 04:53 AM
জাভেদ দাদা,এইগুলা কি আরম্ভ করলেন!:floor:
আর অন্তু ভাই তোমার এই লুক্কায়িত প্রতিভার অগ্নিবিস্ফোরণ দেখে আমি হতবাক হয়ে গেছি..:p

firstlane
May 22, 2011, 07:34 AM
মাস কয়েক আগে একটা বাঙালি কবি-মেয়ের মন রাখতে কিছু একটা লিখতে হয়েছিলো:

"ইচ্ছে হলো কবিতা লিখি কাজে দিয়ে ফাঁকি
invoice এর উল্টোপিঠে করি আকিবুকি
হঠাৎ শুনি boss এর গলা- কি হচ্ছে এটা ?
সময় গেলো, সুনাম গেলো, হলোনা কবিতা।"

আপনাদের আগুনঝরা সব কবিতার মাঝে এই সস্তা ছড়া ঢুকিয়ে দিলাম। গুস্তাকি মাফ করে দিবেন।

Electrequiem
May 22, 2011, 04:51 PM
মাস কয়েক আগে একটা বাঙালি কবি-মেয়ের মন রাখতে কিছু একটা লিখতে হয়েছিলো:

"ইচ্ছে হলো কবিতা লিখি কাজে দিয়ে ফাঁকি
invoice এর উল্টোপিঠে করি আকিবুকি
হঠাৎ শুনি boss এর গলা- কি হচ্ছে এটা ?
সময় গেলো, সুনাম গেলো, হলোনা কবিতা।"

আপনাদের আগুনঝরা সব কবিতার মাঝে এই সস্তা ছড়া ঢুকিয়ে দিলাম। গুস্তাকি মাফ করে দিবেন।
:clap::clap::clap::clap::clap:

bujhee kom
May 22, 2011, 05:29 PM
Eeeeehhh, poddyo rochona??? Podyo rochona giri ber kortasi tomar. Porashuna baad diya, kaaj kormo baad diya....kobita shahityo niye chorcha.....darao na....oi Suloyman....pordar rod-ta dey.....

Dada...ki bolcho Rod, rod!!...Tumar moddhey bahoot bahoot flame achey...you should be flaming right now!..Poddo Lekho dada....

bujhee kom
May 22, 2011, 05:33 PM
[বাংলা] এই কয়েকটি লাইন জিসানের অন্তরে এতো গভীরভাবে প্রথিত... সময়ে সময়ে তা নিজে থেকেই উচ্চারিত হয়ে যায়... অতঃপর পর্দা হতে অপঃসৃয়মান রড আর জীসান দ্রুত অপঃসৃয়মান ঘর হতে। রড বাহক হতে জীসানের আনুভূমিক দুরত্ব দ্রুত গানিতিক হারে সম্রসারিত... দ্রুত পিছলে চলা সময় এবং স্মৃতি শুধু রেখে যায় তীব্র বেদনার কালচে দাগ...। [/বাংলা]

Auntu, tumar lekha jeno kata taarer bera..burbe wire over amar Hrithpindo.heart! Tumar betha ami dekhte pacchi Auntu, I am bleeding with you here...deep deep pain...Is this love related..please you can tell..elaborate...this is a good thread to talk about love...Love, Pain, Poetry, Life, Death, Suffering are all same thing, it's all connected in a garlend of misary! So yes, very painful...

Zeeshan
May 22, 2011, 05:34 PM
Emo sapiens galore!

bujhee kom
May 22, 2011, 05:54 PM
মাস কয়েক আগে একটা বাঙালি কবি-মেয়ের মন রাখতে কিছু একটা লিখতে হয়েছিলো:

"ইচ্ছে হলো কবিতা লিখি কাজে দিয়ে ফাঁকি
invoice এর উল্টোপিঠে করি আকিবুকি
হঠাৎ শুনি boss এর গলা- কি হচ্ছে এটা ?
সময় গেলো, সুনাম গেলো, হলোনা কবিতা।"

আপনাদের আগুনঝরা সব কবিতার মাঝে এই সস্তা ছড়া ঢুকিয়ে দিলাম। গুস্তাকি মাফ করে দিবেন।

Firstlane bhai, apni ekhaney ki bolchen...powerful...just simply super destructive force...like a Heroine addict apni, you are driving a Diesel Locomotive on Full speed like 100 miles/hour and you know what is going to happen...but you can't help yourself, you can't stop the loco, and it feels good, you are in love with this Bangali girl...you are showing the eternal suffering that man must enter through and there is no scape from it, I mean this is amazing, you are about to get fired, maybe your evil perve boss about to violate you but you just do not care...it is the indeed the driving that train high ion cocaine like the great HJerry gercia of the Greatful said, and you are indeed careless and fly like a bug straight into the fire...zzzzzpppp...

the last line [বাংলা]সময় গেলো, সুনাম গেলো, হলোনা কবিতা।[/বাংলা] reflects your innere Bangaliness.your born talent, your gift, your birth-rightm, indeed should be your pride, you speak here just like the big Bengali poets of the past, with same humility, submissiveness, always bowing down and hurting, constantly hurting, it's all my fault, head bashing, the pain there is vivid......you are even saying [বাংলা]হলোনা কবিতা।[/বাংলা]...you are not even going to even give you that that small pleasure of acknowledging that you wrote this beautiful peice, here you are still apologizing, till the very end, and there you end it with that most humble side of Bangali Jala pora of chetona bodh! you
:up:

firstlane
May 22, 2011, 10:52 PM
Firstlane bhai, apni ekhaney ki bolchen...powerful...just simply super destructive force...like a Heroine addict apni, you are driving a Diesel Locomotive on Full speed like 100 miles/hour and you know what is going to happen...but you can't help yourself, you can't stop the loco, and it feels good, you are in love with this Bangali girl...you are showing the eternal suffering that man must enter through and there is no scape from it, I mean this is amazing, you are about to get fired, maybe your evil perve boss about to violate you but you just do not care...it is the indeed the driving that train high ion cocaine like the great HJerry gercia of the Greatful said, and you are indeed careless and fly like a bug straight into the fire...zzzzzpppp...

the last line [বাংলা]সময় গেলো, সুনাম গেলো, হলোনা কবিতা।[/বাংলা] reflects your innere Bangaliness.your born talent, your gift, your birth-rightm, indeed should be your pride, you speak here just like the big Bengali poets of the past, with same humility, submissiveness, always bowing down and hurting, constantly hurting, it's all my fault, head bashing, the pain there is vivid......you are even saying [বাংলা]হলোনা কবিতা।[/বাংলা]...you are not even going to even give you that that small pleasure of acknowledging that you wrote this beautiful peice, here you are still apologizing, till the very end, and there you end it with that most humble side of Bangali Jala pora of chetona bodh! you
:up:

:wow:

kawser
May 22, 2011, 11:06 PM
alohin josnay orano lal nil shopno ghuri
chader hat bosheni shudhui chader buri
ojonhin suto chorachche chorkay urche tulo
chotobelar shei kobitar diary aaj dhuloy morano (dhur amare diya hoibona, 1953 theika try kortasi :D)

kawser
May 22, 2011, 11:07 PM
Oohh bhais, Ki bolbu...Hothaat korey mathai ashlo tai, check it out....


Gajar Rajjey Prithivi Goddomoybornomoy...
Rastaar Dustbin-e purono chera chamrar sandal
Jeno
Adh-khawa ek kerosine bhaja bashi aam-shotto...
othoba Paratha

Kemon hoise bhais?

fixed :D

kawser
May 22, 2011, 11:09 PM
ei matro ekta kobita likhlam bidrohi ekhon dekhi nozrul agei nokol koire rakhse :mad:

firstlane
May 22, 2011, 11:44 PM
ei matro ekta kobita likhlam bidrohi ekhon dekhi nozrul agei nokol koire rakhse :mad:

what a conincidence!

firstlane
May 22, 2011, 11:54 PM
জাভেদ দা, আপনি সাহস দিলেন বলে একটা কবিতা রাখলাম-

আমার কবিতাটা শীতলkkha নদীকে নিয়ে। কিন্তু অনেক চেষ্টা করেও কিবোর্ড এ "khio" লিখতে পারলাম না, তাই কাগজের লেখাটাই ছেপে দিলাম:
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Zeeshan
May 23, 2011, 12:06 AM
firstlane-da

apnar hater lekha mashallah khub shundor

Isnaad
May 23, 2011, 12:17 AM
Amaar majhe royechhe kobi kobi bhab...kintu kobitaar obhab. :(
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firstlane
May 23, 2011, 12:35 AM
firstlane-da

apnar hater lekha mashallah khub shundor

dhonnobaad dada. tobe doya kore kobitatar uopre ektu feedback dien. Amar friend pore bolse- "kacha haater lekha". apnader poramorsho niye aami ektu haat ta pakate chai.

auntu
May 23, 2011, 03:07 AM
auntu, tumar lekha jeno kata taarer bera..burbe wire over amar hrithpindo.heart! Tumar betha ami dekhte pacchi auntu, i am bleeding with you here...deep deep pain...is this love related..please you can tell..elaborate...this is a good thread to talk about love...love, pain, poetry, life, death, suffering are all same thing, it's all connected in a garlend of misary! So yes, very painful...

[বাংলা]আরে জাভেদ ভাই এ কি বলেন! বেশী রক্তারক্তি হলে চলেন যাই ডিএমসির ব্লাড ব্যাংকে রক্ত দিয়ে আসি...।[/বাংলা]

ei matro ekta kobita likhlam bidrohi ekhon dekhi nozrul agei nokol koire rakhse :mad:

[বাংলা]নয়া শিক্ষাঃ বিসিতে বিদ্রোহী কবিতা লেখা যাবে না... [/বাংলা]

dhonnobaad dada. Tobe doya kore kobitatar uopre ektu feedback dien. Amar friend pore bolse- "kacha haater lekha". Apnader poramorsho niye aami ektu haat ta pakate chai.

[বাংলা]ফার্স্ট লেইন আপনার লেখার হাত সত্যিই দারুন। কবিতা পড়ার মূল উদ্দেশ্য মনের আনন্দ পাওয়া। তা আপনার কবিতা পড়ে যথেষ্ঠ পাচ্ছি। জাভেদ ভাইয়ের জন্য কিছু প্রেমের কবিতা আর জীসানের জন্য ছ্যাকামাইসিন কিছু থাকলে ঝেড়ে দিন...।

অপেক্ষায় থাকলাম[/বাংলা]

firstlane
May 23, 2011, 03:45 AM
জাভেদ ভাইয়ের জন্য কিছু প্রেমের কবিতা আর জীসানের জন্য ছ্যাকামাইসিন কিছু থাকলে ঝেড়ে দিন...।

অপেক্ষায় থাকলাম[/বাংলা]

অসংখ ধন্যবাদ অন্তদা আপনার দয়ালু শব্দগুলোর জন্য। ছ্যাকামাইসিন কিছু লিখতে হলে এখন কল্কিতে টাঁন দিতে হবে। তবে আপাতত জাভেদ দাদার জন্য আমার প্রথম লেখা ছড়াটি উৎসর্গ করছি। কেন জানি মনে হচ্ছে ছড়াটা ওনার সাথে খুব যায়-

"চশমা চোখে রেখে দাদা সারা বাড়ি খোজে
বাড়ির সবাই দাদাকে তাই বোকা বলে বোঝে।
আসলে দাদা নয়তো বোকা, সবচে বেশি চালাক
একটা বিয়ে করে আর একটা দেয় তালাক।"

auntu
May 24, 2011, 06:37 AM
[বাংলা]^^^ সাধু সাধু! অসাধারন দাদা! দয়া করে কল্কের সহায়তাবিহীন এক লেখে ফেলুন...[/বাংলা]

Ajfar
May 25, 2011, 01:28 AM
Me without you is like an iphone with no apps
<br />Posted via BC Mobile Edition (iPhone)

Jadukor
May 25, 2011, 05:22 AM
Me without you is like an iphone with no apps

Posted via BC Mobile Edition (iPhone)
lol love this modern kobita!...

Rifat
June 4, 2011, 04:49 PM
<iframe width="425" height="349" src="http://www.youtube.com/embed/ySf0hCJfdvU" frameborder="0" allowfullscreen></iframe>

Ajfar
June 5, 2011, 01:40 AM
I bet this is how Rifat picks up girls, 'I need to break my fast. Can I have a date?'