Was is really necessary to quote a large portion of the text? You already provided the URL.
It would have been nice if you had provided a brief introduction to the author, the specific points he was trying to make and may be a little quote from his argument along with your notion that your are trying to achieve from that reference.
I don't wanna sound overtly restrictive to anyone. Just reiterating the readability and quality of the posted argument. A reader should take pleasure instead of being unduely burdened by a knowledgable and sound discussion. Cheers.
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