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Originally Posted by bujhee kom
bhais, i am writing a super romantic poem for my wife! i need someone kind to proofread the poem before i recite it her this evening!
(ice age dark rose)
"ice cold frozen tundra....siberia...white storm...cotton drop
frozen planet....long dead...the sun's gone
frozen bones....baggy eyes...coffee's stale and old!"
so far i only got three lines...working on the 4th.
thank you all!
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Is her name Nakita by any chance? Keep her away from Elton John then. Else no worries.
What a wonderful melody. May be you can make this poem in to a song!! She may love you more.