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Old May 9, 2007, 11:27 AM
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Originally Posted by zahid
Hmmm... let me check the mistakes ( see below ) There are some punctuation and grammer mistakes. But, overall it's soooo much better. Congrats on the improvement.



This is a perfect version :



Lol u shud be an english teacher lol:p
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