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Old October 2, 2008, 12:02 AM
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bhais, i am writing a super romantic poem for my wife! i need someone kind to proofread the poem before i recite it her this evening!

(ice age dark rose)
"ice cold frozen tundra....siberia...white storm...cotton drop
frozen planet....long dead...the sun's gone
frozen bones....baggy eyes...coffee's stale and old!"

so far i only got three lines...working on the 4th.
thank you all!
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