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Old January 2, 2004, 03:13 AM
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"The Ispahani National Cricket League a, who shared the one-dawill for the last time see most of its star players take field, when fourth round begins, today, in a match involving the two finalists of the last season, in a revised fixture."
take out the 'a' and make the othe one "one-day will" - now it's pretty clear... well almost. He is giving too much info in one sentence. It's not that bad.

[Edited on 2-1-2004 by Orpheus]
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