Originally Posted by Tigers_eye
Is her name Nakita by any chance? Keep her away from Elton John then. Else no worries.
What a wonderful melody. May be you can make this poem in to a song!! She may love you more.
thank you so much mijan bhaiya for your wonderful advice!
she doesn't like elton john though mijan bhai!
Originally Posted by Gopal Bhar
3 lines enuff.....just refine it further....you got a cool haiku flavor to it...
thank you gopal bhaiya for your kind words and advice!
and now after thanking both you, i must tell you two what happened after i recited the poem to her!
.....she threw hot coffee at me and kicked me out of the house last night! so, since lsat night i have been sleeping in a park with one of my cats! she kicked the cat out too! can me and my cat move in with you guys now?