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Old December 26, 2012, 12:11 AM
RezaA RezaA is offline
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Here's my first part I intent to finish Insh Allah. Give me your honest opinion.

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“Kalu, kesu dekhsos?” asked Noli.
“Kesu nai bhai. Amar mone hoi shob keesu akhon keeliear. Cholen Allah’r nam nia- Bismillah, Allahu Akbar.” Kalu lead the way, and both of their senses were on high elert. They are on hunt for killing an international official to avenge Noli’s brother’s death.
“Kalu re ar koto durre bhai?”
“Ar dur nai beshi…aktu dhiorjo dhoren.”
They came to a lake of clear water. The moon with its beauty, shine and spender already calm both them and their thurst. Kalu put his whole head into the lake and started to drink and took up his head and breath a bit then put his head again to drink. Seeing Kalu’s action Noli started to laugh out loud. “Kalu re bhai, shob pane akbare khabeeny!!!”
Kalu took of his shirt and then jumped into the lake to cool his body. Noli taking of his shirt jumped into the lake and started swimming and drinking at the same time.
The moon had set a while now and only the light rays and rays of light bouncing of the lake water.
Hunger made both of them wake up. Noli,”Kalure ei jongole kee kesui nai. Dekh kesu pash kena?”
Both of them started walking. They do not have much to carry. Both of them thanked Allah. Right infront of us is a tree full of leechee. “O Allah,” both said simultaneously. They ate as much as possible. The tree wasn’t much taller so they climbed to the top and took all the ripe ones. Then they saw monkeys, the competitors. It is better to ration now then to fight them. The alpha screeched showing his beautifully large teeth.
“Now how the hell we’ll take water with us?”
Kalu answered, “Bhai cholen pothe keesu milai jabo ei ta jongol, chaor obhab nai. Chinta nean na, cholen allaher namee.”

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