Ashen Bhaishob, lekhi kobita

[RezaA]

Esho heE pri0,

Mar0 amake
Paro joto betha deete
Korbona amee rag
Neebo shob dukhkho and betha
Amar hashi mukhe
Koro more obohela
Korbona tomake bhul bujte
Keentu jabo bhalobeshe amee je tomake
Shopno chilo
ache ajo shei bhalobasha
nei shopno
kintu ajo bhabte bhalolage,
tomake.

[RezaA]

It is wrong to dream
It is wrong to dream, because it never true
Dream deviates
Dream removes the reality

[Zunaid]

Originally Posted by RezaA

Esho heE pri0,

Mar0 amake
Paro joto betha deete
Korbona amee rag
Neebo shob dukhkho and betha
Amar hashi mukhe
Koro more obohela
Korbona tomake bhul bujte
Keentu jabo bhalobeshe amee je tomake
Shopno chilo
ache ajo shei bhalobasha
nei shopno
kintu ajo bhabte bhalolage,
tomake.

Is this your own poem or did you lift it from someone.

[Jadukor]

Originally Posted by Zunaid
Is this your own poem or did you lift it from someone.

Having read it twice, i am pretty sure it is authentic

[Zunaid]

Originally Posted by Jadukor
Having read it twice, i am pretty sure it is authentic

No it's not. Unfortunately, plagiarized from someone with an even worse writing skills. I was just hoping for him to 'fess up.

http://ppgcal.webs.com/amarkichukabita.htm

[Jadukor]

Originally Posted by Zunaid
No it's not. Unfortunately, plagiarized from someone with an even worse writing skills. I was just hoping for him to 'fess up.

http://ppgcal.webs.com/amarkichukabita.htm

Lol! my apologies, didn't think a poem of that quality would be worth copying. I stand corrected.

[RezaA]

ha ha ha guys guys I know it s*** as poem and I wrote in a state of sleepyness. It isn't a plagiarism. Infraction I received should be lifted. I really don't kknow how to write a story/poem. but why not give a try, right? Thanks.

[simon]

ei Reza miya bhai ki Sir Humayun er otripto atta naki ? shudhu lekha lekhi korar ahoban janay? kar fictious love story maira na abar ekta package natok kore pheley.

[ReZ_1]

Reza vai agia cholen amra achi apnar dure..

[Cric_2]

kharap hoi nai bhai, chalie jan... Ami'o likechilam akbar.. but, jake diyechilam sha shudu amar kobitar title'tai pochondho korechilo, subject noi..

But, unfortunatly amar kobitar kono titile'e chilo na, o amar kobitar first line'ka title bevechilo... sei theke, kobita likha bondho.. tobe akta jinish thik, kobita likher shobceye prime time hocche preme porar aage ar cheka khaower por...

[Zunaid]

RezaA- waiting for an acknowledgement to the plagiarism charge.

- As Admin.

[Zunaid]

Originally Posted by Cric_2
kharap hoi nai bhai, chalie jan... Ami'o likechilam akbar.. but, jake diyechilam sha shudu amar kobitar title'tai pochondho korechilo, subject noi..

But, unfortunatly amar kobitar kono titile'e chilo na, o amar kobitar first line'ka title bevechilo... sei theke, kobita likha bondho.. tobe akta jinish thik, kobita likher shobceye prime time hocche preme porar aage ar cheka khaower por...

Shahidul - khamakha chotha encourage korar knono dforkar nai. Obossho, best poem lekha hoe chekhar poray.

[RezaA]

Originally Posted by Zunaid
RezaA- waiting for an acknowledgement to the plagiarism charge.

- As Admin.

It seems you want me to be guilty when I am not. As I said the poem is mine.

[Zeeshan]

ki holo tarpor? kata ghaye chita dite chachi na jodio...

[RezaA]

Originally Posted by Zeeshan
ki holo tarpor? kata ghaye chita dite chachi na jodio...

Kee kon bhaijan? Keesui to bujlam na...amar ga kokhon kata gha kokhon hoilo....loboni ba chitailo keda....keesui so bujlam na....anyway bhai, mon akhon bhalo toooo....amee shesher dike chintai porchilam......

[zman]

hai hai ... kobi to dekhi kobita likhte likhte shoheed hoye gelo...ini holen banglar eshomoyer kobigouru...shadharon manush take chinte parlo na...one day minstrels will write songs about this greatness and sacrifice

[Zunaid]

Breathes there the man with soul so dead
Who never to himself hath said
This is not my own penned poem
Whose heart hath never burnt with truth
For him no minstrel raptures well
High though his genious, power, or pelf
Doubly dying shall go down
To the vile ban hammer
Unwept, unhonored, unsung

[Trying to remember from HSC, about 3 decades ago. Damn, I remembered most of it]

Apologies to Sir Walter Scott.

[iDumb]

Love is gay
if so
why can't gays love?
Love is crazy
if so
why crazies don't get love
love is wanting a blonde in your bed
if so
why you gotta pay for it?

The END
Penned by iGenious 4/4/2013 c BC.
Apologies to all the lovers...